Post by Loki on Sept 6, 2007 17:02:42 GMT -5
Alright, this is a story that I thought would be cool to start. I just though about it a few days ago, so it isn't very developed, but for now I'll just make it as I go. If you decide to read this, feel free to make coments.
History:
In the beginning, the world of Serio had four main races. Goblins, Humans, Elves, and Dwarves. They were constantly fighting over land and sea alike. Eventually, the elves, being the most sensible of the four, decided to create a treaty. When finished, the presented it to the other three main races. They accepted, and were each assigned an area to control. The Goblins were to control the East, which was mostly wetland and swamps. The Dwarves were assigned to the North, which was mostly mountains and highlands. The Humans were assigned to the west, which was mostly deserts. Finally, the elves were assigned tot he south, which was mostly forests and tropical environments. But, this left the other, weaker races with nowhere to go but the neutral area inbetween all the races territory. This place was an icy wasteland, which none of the races seemed to care much about, which is why it was neutral. The Pixies, Ogres, Shapeshifters, and Halflings lived there. The problem was, the Ogres hated pixies and Halflings, and they were constanly at war, which sometimes pushed the halfling and pixies into enemy territory. So, the elves made another treaty, that allowed the ogres to live in the Goblins, as long as they obeyed the goblins. The Ogres accepted, as well as the goblins. After that, everything was peaceful, until one day, the Ogres and Goblins attacked! The elves were their first victim. The elves, in an attempt to stopped them, called upon the beasts of legend. The beasts came to them, and a select few rode them into battle. This is how the Beast Riders were formed. Although, with such few elves being accepte as master of a creature, it was not enough. The ogres and the goblins together were to much. The elves were forced to retreat into human and dwarf territory. Luckily, the two races allowed this when they heard what the goblin king had done. The three races agin called on the beasts of legend, and the beasts chose their masters. Together, they were able to defeat the Goblins and Ogres, driving them back into their own territory. In order to stop any further breaking of the treaty, the humans, dwarves, and elves formed the beast riders!
((Ok, what do you think of the basic storyline? Be brutal.))
History:
In the beginning, the world of Serio had four main races. Goblins, Humans, Elves, and Dwarves. They were constantly fighting over land and sea alike. Eventually, the elves, being the most sensible of the four, decided to create a treaty. When finished, the presented it to the other three main races. They accepted, and were each assigned an area to control. The Goblins were to control the East, which was mostly wetland and swamps. The Dwarves were assigned to the North, which was mostly mountains and highlands. The Humans were assigned to the west, which was mostly deserts. Finally, the elves were assigned tot he south, which was mostly forests and tropical environments. But, this left the other, weaker races with nowhere to go but the neutral area inbetween all the races territory. This place was an icy wasteland, which none of the races seemed to care much about, which is why it was neutral. The Pixies, Ogres, Shapeshifters, and Halflings lived there. The problem was, the Ogres hated pixies and Halflings, and they were constanly at war, which sometimes pushed the halfling and pixies into enemy territory. So, the elves made another treaty, that allowed the ogres to live in the Goblins, as long as they obeyed the goblins. The Ogres accepted, as well as the goblins. After that, everything was peaceful, until one day, the Ogres and Goblins attacked! The elves were their first victim. The elves, in an attempt to stopped them, called upon the beasts of legend. The beasts came to them, and a select few rode them into battle. This is how the Beast Riders were formed. Although, with such few elves being accepte as master of a creature, it was not enough. The ogres and the goblins together were to much. The elves were forced to retreat into human and dwarf territory. Luckily, the two races allowed this when they heard what the goblin king had done. The three races agin called on the beasts of legend, and the beasts chose their masters. Together, they were able to defeat the Goblins and Ogres, driving them back into their own territory. In order to stop any further breaking of the treaty, the humans, dwarves, and elves formed the beast riders!
((Ok, what do you think of the basic storyline? Be brutal.))