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Post by KläsΘr on Dec 4, 2007 19:15:28 GMT -5
Death Valley By Michael Lee
Calvin walked forward, he attempted to read the crooked sign. Blood splattered words covered the metal board hung by chains rusted over many years. The sign squeeked even during the small breeze. Calvin made out the word Death Valley on the sign before having his head forced down by the thing currently holding his arm. He had not seen what was holding onto him but it reeked of flesh. The last thing he remembered was being at his house typing up a long line of writing. He had been working on a project for a long time now and was almost finished. Even if he wasnt a good writer he felt has this was one of the greatest things ever, but heck of course he would he was the one who wrote it. He remembers a faint beam of light, a reddish color. Then darkness. The creature pushed him along. Eventually he they both arrived at a large building. Calvin wondered why a building like this would be in such a deserted area. It looked like a large steel box. No windows, No escapes, no hope. Calvin shuddered at the thought of going in there but he know that was where he was being sent. Upon approaching the dreaded building he noticed a medium sized flag. On it was a picture of the United States flag shredded to pieces on the ground and the words: Down with life, up with murder. Calvin knew his life won't be much longer because that sign sent shivers down his spine, and with that he passed out.
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Post by Zorel on Dec 4, 2007 19:19:35 GMT -5
o.o own.
bring on the death of the people!!
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Post by Zorel on Dec 4, 2007 19:23:30 GMT -5
HA! FIRST POST FOR THE PWN!
Anyway, dont give up on this, even though most stories on here are given up on.
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Post by Loki on Dec 5, 2007 11:55:05 GMT -5
XD. I ahve two stories I gave up on.... course, one was never posted on, so I mean...
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Post by KläsΘr on Dec 10, 2007 16:31:54 GMT -5
He woke up hours later he believed. Or did he wake up? He believed so. Calvins first reaction was to reach for his head. He noticed the right side of his head was caked with blood. He wondered if it was his but didn't question it after whatever had been numbing him wore off. Calvin wanted to scream badly but do to the sounds of screams outside of this room he felt as if that was a bad idea. The walls were wet but Calvin didn't bother to wonder, he probably didn't want to know. Around fifteen mintutes passed and all he found out was that he was in a circular room. He sat where he was and weeped. Someone must have heard him thought because he heard the sounds of a door opening. It wasn't open much longer for the person to throw something in and close it. A loud ringing began it reminded Calvin of the sound on his cell phone, generic but it worked. This was much louder though. The item that was thrown in eventually started flickering a red light. Faster and faster until it was just a constant stream. Calvin couldn't help but scream the pain was too much. Pretty soon he found that he was both blind and deaf. Either that or the light and sound stopped "YOUR IN OUR CONTROL NOW!" A menacing voice spoke. Calvin had know idea how he could hear the voice. That is until he began to see again. "Yes, right now you see what I see. You see what a Deform see's. You are now at Death Valley. This is where you will eventually die. You see in this place we take humans who have destoryed this earth and kill them in the worst possible ways. You go through a few treatments. Everyday you will have 1 hour of death watch. This means you must watch as us Deforms kill humans. Everyday you will have 1 hour of torture, that speaks for itself. The rest of the day will be for communication upon the other humans. The rest will be learned as you are here."
I dont have set chapters so Ill just add them as sections
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