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Post by Loki on Dec 12, 2006 16:37:32 GMT -5
Also, I am sooo beastly!!!!! Look at me, a master with the ladies!!! Dearla.... Hmmm.... Spicy! ONe more thing, a tiny fairy in the potty!? I knew the toilet fairy was real!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Loki on Dec 13, 2006 16:52:13 GMT -5
Duuuuuuuuuur! When.... Next.... Chapter..... Be...... Ready?
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Post by Zorel on Dec 13, 2006 16:59:03 GMT -5
This chapter is AWESOME! I LOVED WRITING IT!! ^_^
Chapter Eight The fairy squirmed out of the disgusting toilet, and flew around the boy’s bathroom. The fairy was female, with a bright colorful face and shining wings. It was quite mesmerizing, but Makar stayed alarm. “What do you want fairy?” The fairy was confused. “Ŏlachi, nomanada” Makar smirked. “Of course, you cannot speak our language. I don’t know fairy language. How can I communicate with it?” The fairy seemed to understand. “Echilumon, rellu,” said the fairy as she pointed toward a mirror. The fairy quickly materialized a quill filled with ink, and wrote upon the mirror. ‘Uchii հilo reincarr shuaz ekinoman sheiliz recantinum lillipuntum shiishilum puuscuzzill’ The fairy blinked three times, and then the words morphed into Makar’s language. He read it aloud, “I do not know who you are or what you are doing here, but know I mean you no harm and that I am a friend” Makar wrote a response upon the mirror using the same quill, and the fairy translated it to fairy language. “Mosque reinum wreinomata shuu,” read the fairy. Makar had written, ‘I appreciate your acceptance as a friend.’ The fairy was off with that, floating through a doorway and out into the school. Makar was amazed by his experience, and he was happy the rest of the day. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Makar walked down the dirt road to Ălerd Town. He held the three gold pieces in his hand tightly, and sweat dripped from his forehead onto the hand. He was only of seven years of age at the time, and was still very young, yet his parents sent him to Ălerd Town anyway. A horse-drawn carriage rolled along the road toward Makar, and Makar strafed off the road into the grass. The carriage stopped, and a tall man stepped out. “Could you tell me where a man named Duan and a lady named Oriana could be found?” “Those people are my parents,” Makar said, “they’re just down the road in the small village.” The tall man grinned, “Thank you. My name is Juad” >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Makar quickly headed to Bow Study, and he met up with Sorik, Loki, Adain, and Ktsed too. The teacher, who addressed herself as Mrs. Kirlinia, handed everyone a short Maplewood bow. She also handed out a few arrows to each student, and was announcing a pre-semester exam. The task at hand was quite simple: to use all three or four of your arrows up in a hunting contest through the woods. A missed arrow could not be used twice. The student who hits the most of the other student gained the most bonus points for class. Mrs. Kirlinia was constantly using a heal spell on wounds as soon as they were hit, and monitored to see if anyone were to try and cheat. The children were all set at a pot on different sides of the woods. Mrs. Kirlinia set a bow in her string, “Ujuklosi,” and she let go. The arrow flew through the air, hundreds of feet, and exploded. That sent the group of children into the woods, preparing their arrows to shoot at each other. Makar headed through the thick forest, and perched on a tree branch, waiting for his first victim. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Makar held the food he was sent to Ălerd Town for, and sighed heavily. He had another half-hour walk until he got back home. He watched his feet kick up the dirt on the path, and then he sneezed. He looked down the path, and saw that same man. His carriage was gone though. “Juad?” Makar cried. Juad stopped in front of him. He was holding a sword drenched in blood, and slung across his back were two heads strung together. They were Makar’s parent’s heads. Makar stood back at least three yards, and pulled out his weapon-a stick his father had carved a year ago. It was sturdy and strong, and was pointed at the end. Juad chuckled, then began to walk past Makar. Makar, infuriated, dashed toward Juad, and shoved his stick through his right leg. Juad’s eyes gaped open, and he fell down, clutching his wound. He jabbed at Makar with his bloody sword, but Makar dodged, and whacked Juad multiple times in the head with the stick. Juad, forcing to take the pain, sprawled on to his feet and ran in the direction of Ălerd Town. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Makar looked out of one eye, and stared down the cloaked figure. The figure walked with a serene grace, and looked around cautiously. Makar let go, and the arrow twanged toward the target. The arrow hit, and Mrs. Kirlinia quickly healed the wound, and kept the score for Makar. Makar dashed toward the person and said, “Hey, are you alright?” The person turned toward him, and Makar saw that it was Dearla. Makar realized her beauty for the first time, and coughed hard. “Oh, hello Dearla” Dearla smiled large, and removed the cloak from her head. She moved in close to Makar, and stared in his eyes. “Hello, Makar,” she said in an intimidating voice. She quickly moved her face into his, and lips touched. Makar was surprised, and after it was over, he frowned, and walked away. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Makar dragged his feet toward his home, and found many villagers crowded around the beheaded bodies of his parents. Makar cried a moment, but his grandparents took him in immediately. They used a forget spell, that made him forget everything about that time. He still remembered small pieces, like of Juad, who still roamed Scryon, but that was all. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< The exam ended, and Sorik easily won, having all four of his arrows hit with amazing precision. The children grouped up and left, going to their dormitories having finished all their classes for the day. Makar quickly spoke with Loki about Dearla. “Yes Loki, Dearla just…kissed me in the woods.” Loki’s mouth dropped open. “You hit her? With an ARROW? How could you hit her amazing physique?” Makar, angry, left Loki to himself, not bothering how she had kissed him. The next day, a strange thing occurred. Dearla was sick. She could not move from her bed. She stayed their all day with a horrible cough and fever. However, near the beginning of the day, a new girl arrived. “She had a long journey from where she lived to get here. It took her a while. Please give a wonderful greeting to our new student, Reeya” Every male student couldn’t help but stare. Loki was quickly over Dearla, as the new girl was fantastically beautiful. Her silky brown hair swayed in the wind, and her green eyes twinkled just right when the sun hit them. Her lips were smooth and straight, and her complexion was amazing. She walked along, up the stairs to her dormitory, as the males stared as she walked. Makar, finally ending his endless stare, converted his gaze to the sky, which oddly was growing dark, when it was only noon. “What’s in the sky?” asked Vendon from deep in the crowd. Zorel walked outside, and stared at the sky. He was frightened deeply. “Get inside children, and go to your dormitories and lock all the doors, quickly. Do not leave until a teacher allows you to.” The children followed, and Zorel whispered to one of the teachers, “Juad”
Next chapter ready now. This one is just fantastic.
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Post by Zorel on Dec 13, 2006 17:00:06 GMT -5
A few terms used are here:
Ŏlachi, nomanada-I cannot understand you, stranger Echilumon, rellu-come this way, strange one Uchii հilo reincarr shuaz ekinoman sheiliz recantinum lillipuntum shiishilum puuscuzzill-I do not know who you are or what you are doing here, but know I mean you no harm and that I am a friend Mosque reinum wreinomata shuu-I appreciate your exceptance as a friend.
Ujuklosi-explode
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Post by Loki on Dec 13, 2006 17:09:01 GMT -5
THAT DIRTY CHEATING MAKAR!!!!!!!!! I'LL KILL HIM!!!!!!
*Makar blows uyp, then I kill his dead body!*
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Post by Zorel on Dec 13, 2006 17:14:34 GMT -5
Loki, Makar didn't do anything, and you weren't going out with Dearla, she just knew you liked her. Dearla kissed Makar, not Makar kissing her. Anything else I need to explain so Michael is no longer a poofie-fish? (Makar+Klasor are both Michael)
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Post by KläsΘr on Dec 13, 2006 18:08:33 GMT -5
yes Makar is a different character in my story than Klasor... Makar was the main character in my first story and now in this one Klasor is.... and i am not a poofie fish
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Post by Loki on Dec 13, 2006 19:58:39 GMT -5
Fine, you are just a FISH!
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Post by Zorel on Dec 14, 2006 19:01:42 GMT -5
Chapter Nine Adain and Loki quickly dashed through the field of corn stalks, occasionally looking back to see if the barrage continued. Adain was of ten years old, and Loki only nine, yet they ran as if they were adults. “Loki, these men, I think they killed our parents the day they died…I think they summoned the serpent!” “Adain, do they want us dead too?” Adain nodded, “Yes, so we must run faster!” Another huge flaming ball fell from the sky, crashing into the field. Loki and Adain dove to the ground and covered their heads as the flaming rock shot small debris across the field. They stood back up ands instantly ran faster, toward nowhere. They hoped there would be somewhere they would be safe at. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Loki jumped over a pile of books and hurried up the stairs. Most of the children had already gotten into their dormitories. Loki was far behind. He tripped over his own feet, and closed his eyes before landing on the floor. He finally found the door, and hurriedly spoke the words, “Kuula” The door clicked, and Loki dashed inside. Panting, he went into his room and met Ktsed, Adain, Sorik, and Makar already there. “What is happening guys?” began Loki, “Zorel looked very frightened.” “I heard him talking about someone named Juad. Ever heard of him?” mentioned Ktsed. Makar’s eyes widened. “Juad?” There was dead silence. “Yeah Makar, have you heard of him?” “Yes…my memory of that day is quite vague, but I think he is an evil man. I think he murdered someone, but I don’t really know.” “Does that mean Juad is here? And why is the sky darkening?” asked Adain. “Adain, nobody has answers except Zorel. We won’t have any idea unless we find Zorel.” Said Sorik. Another moment of silence, then Ktsed spoke up, “Then let’s go find Zorel” >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Loki and Adain found a shed ahead, and they ran much harder. They ducked, dodging another flaming ball, and then Adain kicked down the door to the shed. He rushed in, and grabbed Loki. They dove to the floor and rest on a pile of hay. “Loki, if anything happens to me, I need you to run.” Adain coughed. “Okay Adain,” Loki replied valiantly. They lay there a long while, watching the flaming balls being shot toward the shed. They cowered in fear, and shivered on the cold night. Far off from the shed, a group of seven men continued casting a fire spell on large boulders, and shooting them in the air. “They’ve gone too far Juad, we’ll never catch them nor find them, we must hope that we hit them.” said Klasor. Juad chuckled menacingly, “Who says we cannot catch or find them? I sure don’t, because I’ll shoot one of you off down there” The six other men stood back. “Okay, Klasor, Kratos, Ageru, Shenkin, Rugos, and Hinen, you must go in that direction,” said Juad, pointing north, “and kill those two children. If we don’t kill them now, there will be trouble in the future.” The six men nodded, and walked north. Juad continued an assault of flaming balls while they walked. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Ktsed, Makar, Adain, Loki, and Adain snuck out of their room and out of the dormitory. They stood alone in a large hallway. Sorik and Adain went first, checking around every corner in case a teacher would catch them, or even Juad. They knew Zorel was always on the top floor of the school, so they would have to pass the fifteen to seventeen year old dormitory. They crept up the stairs, and checked around. The entire floor was empty. They checked the paintings along the walls and how completely different this floor was. They passed the door to the dormitory, and were not noticed. They found the final staircase that led to the teacher’s dormitories and Zorel’s room. There was a force field blocking the way up. “How will we get past this?” asked Ktsed. Adain smiled, “Isn’t it obvious? It’s simply an easy to solve riddle” “What are you talking about,” Sorik said, “I see no way to solve this ‘riddle’” Adain chuckled, “I guess you guys must not be as intelligent as I. Look around, at all of the paintings” Makar was first to notice, “All of the paintings say ӱuchecken at the bottom corners!” “Precisely,” said Adain, “Next, look at that picture on the wall over there,” Everyone looked. It was a picture of Zorel, he was wearing a long black coat with a sword in his hand. “If you look closely, there are words on the sword.” Sorik was first to see, “They say…Ugatchi” “Yes Sorik, and what does Ugatchi mean in the magic language?” Sorik thought a moment, “It means…force field.” Adain laughed hard. “Do you understand yet?” “No Adain. I haven’t an idea what you are talking about” Adain sighed, “Think Sorik, what does ӱuchecken mean in the fairy language?” “The fairy language? I know only three words of the fairy language!” “Yes, and you should know this one” Sorik calculated every sound and letter in the fairy language he knew, and put them together the best he could. He finally came up with, “Open?” Adain smiled, “Yes Sorik, if we put our two words together, we have ӱuchecken Ugatchi, which means…Open Force Field!” The force field guarding the way up the stairs disappeared, and the group walked up the stairs. “That was amazing Adain. How did you know all of this?” asked Loki. “Oh, just a lot of things I’ve studied in the past.” >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Adain awoke from his half-hour nap. He saw six men walking in the field, and he quickly awoke Loki. “Loki, get up!” Loki awoke startled, but realized they were in danger. They quickly found in opening in the back of the shed, and ran out of it. Adain and Loki ran as fast as they could away from the shed. They found a dirt road about a mile from the shed, and noticed that the six men had seen them. They were shooting arrows from their bows at them furiously, and they were coming close to the two brothers. Adain thoughts quickly, and noticed another man walking down the road. He was slow, but walked in a manly and powerful stride. He stopped in front of the boys. “Are those men chasing you? Let’s get out of here, my name is Juad” >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< The highest floor in the school was quite small, but the multiple dormitories for the teachers were very nice and seemed large. There was an extremely large window on one end, and another at the other end. They were high up, and could see for miles from the window. They found a large door with a large “Z” on it. They figured this was Zorel’s room. “Should we knock our just enter?” asked Loki. They decided to knock quietly, so the teachers didn’t hear abnd leave their dormitories. They knocked quietly and heard a stir from inside the room. The huge door opened up, and a startled Zorel stared at the boys. “How did you get up here, and why are you up here?” he said angrily. “You see, our friend Adain figured out the riddle to opening the force field, and we’re up here for answers” said Sorik. Zorel glared, but finally invited them in. “You must be a very intelligent young man to figure out the riddle. The teachers had to figure it out themselves, and half of them had twice as much trouble as you did.” Adain blushed. “It was nothing really” Zorel sat down in a large red chair that overlooked the outside from a small window. “So, what kind of answers do you want?” “We would like to know who Juad is, and how the sky is darkening, and if Juad is here or not” Zorel’s face turned very dark and grim. He sighed, and answered, “Juad is the leader of the Seven Sentries, a group of evil men who have amazing abilities and are very powerful. They all have the same ability-which is stealing magical energy from others when they are dead. So, they wander Scryon, killing wizards and stealing their magic. Juad is here to steal my magic, along with all of the kids’ magic and the teachers’ magic. The other six men of the Seven Sentries are not near as powerful as Juad, but they are strong too, and they do all of the dirty work. There is Kratos, Klasor, Ageru, Shenkin, Rugos, and Hinen. They all are masters of a specific weapon, where Juad can fight with anything. The sky is dark here, because Juad is planning an attack. Whenever he plans to attack, he casts a spell that makes the sky dark as a showing that blood will be spilled within two weeks. The sky is darkest where he plans to attack, and it is darkest here. Juad plans to attack this school within two weeks, and it could be at any time within then, so I must keep all students inside their dormitories to keep them safe from harm. I cannot let anyone get hurt. Juad has absorbed the most powerful of magic, from abilities to spells, that there are very little ways of destroying him. I haven’t found any spell that he cannot counter, so if he attacks, all is lost. I believe he wants you, because all of you have abilities…amazing ones.” The kids’ eyes widened. “I thought only Sorik and Makar had abilities,” said Loki. Zorel chuckled, “Oh no, all of you have abilities, and you will discover them soon.” Loki smiled, “Wow, I bet I can…kill people or something! Or maybe I can fly!” “You will know in due time. No, you must hurriedly return to your dormitories, and try not to make too much noise. Good-bye!” The children waved good-bye, and left back to their dormitories. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Adain and Loki ran with Juad down the road. They finally stopped at a campsite. “Okay you two, now I’ve got to put you to sleep.” said Juad. “We don’t want to sleep,” said Adain, “we’re just fine awake. Juad frowned. “Oh but you are not children, it is getting dark out. So go to sleep and you will wake up tomorrow morning. I’ll keep those men away from you” Loki and Adain looked at each other, “No thanks” Juad’s eyed turned dark red, “Come here!” Juad jumped toward Loki and Adain, hands ready to grab them. Adain, startled, grabbed Loki and ran off. Juad tossed three lightning spells, but they nimbly dodged. “Uh-oh, I must make sure they don’t remember me! Ascuinine!” A bolt of green light was sent toward the two. It hit Loki and Adain, and their memory of the time was wiped away. Juad quickly got out of sight before they saw him. Loki was drowsy, “Where are we?” he asked Adain. “I dunno, let’s just walk down this road I guess” Loki and Adain walked down the road for hours, until they found a small village named Ălerd Town, where a small family took them in. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< The next day, the sky was no longer dark, and Zorel allowed classes, yet they were stuck inside. Archery and sword classes were kept to simply hitting targets instead of advanced stuff. Ktsed and Makar were the first into the alchemy room however. The teacher, Mr. Jiliad, greeted everyone in a bad tone. “Sit down, and open the books to page forty-four, and read” The children all obeyed, yet were scared of Mr. Jiliad. He was always commanding children in a unfriendly way. After everyone had read page forty-four, he set three sets of potions on each table. Makar and Ktsed sat together, looking at the strange liquid. “Alright children, mix together potions “A” and “B”, but make sure “C” doesn’t get into anything.” Makar and Ktsed mixed potions “A” and “B”, and saw orange smoke waver around the room. “This mixture is called the Ogamon Mixture. Whenever you pour this liquid onto any substance, the substance is then rubbery. Try pouring the Ogamon Mixture onto the piece of wood I lay on your table” Makar and Ktsed were fascinated by the hard wood being changed into the now rubbery wood. They twisted and stretched the wood, while laughing heartily. “Alright, you’ve learned of the Ogamon Mixture,, now its time to see if you can handle something a bit more…difficult. Now, pour potion “C” onto the part of the wood that is rubbery.” Ktsed did this, and the rubbery wood melted in an instant. “I’ve already completed the mixture. Potion “C” is the Rile Mixture, which is created with Manticore Saliva and Chimera Wing. The Rile Mixture has the ability to melt anything in Scryon with no struggle at all.” After learning more about the Rile Mixture, Mr. Jiliad let the class out, and on the way to Axe Study, Loki and Makar stopped to talk to Reeya. “He-hello Reeya” started Loki. The beautiful Reeya laughed, “Hello. What is your name?” Loki smiled, and mouthed to Makar, ‘We’re making a good start’. “Oh, my name is Loki, and,” Loki looked at Makar, “this is Makar” Reeya looked at Makar rather than Loki, “Hello Makar.” Loki was angry, and mouthed to Makar again, ‘Must all of the pretty girls like you?’ Makar breathed in heavily, “Hello Reeya. It’s very nice to meet you.” Reeya smiled, “Here, meet me here at seven tonight, okay?” She handed Makar a slip of paper written in amazing hand-writing. He stared at Reeya as she walked off. “She’s so beautiful,” sighed Loki. Makar looked at the paper, it said. Meet me in the Ballroom at seven. Make sure no one is with you, Reeya.
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Post by Zorel on Dec 14, 2006 19:02:40 GMT -5
That was the longest chaptee yet, and is easily my favorite chapter yet. Five stars!! ^_^
Terms:
Shenkin-shang-kin Rugos-roo-gos Hinen-high-nin ӱuchecken-open Ugatchi-force field Jiliad-jill-ee-add
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Post by Zorel on Dec 14, 2006 20:20:51 GMT -5
Thank you. Which is your favorite chapteR? Mine is Chapter Nine, without a question.
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